So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters. The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation) It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now" If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.
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