Review Detail of Hadi_Djouini in My System Academy
Review detail
Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh
My System Academy
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They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
I've read to chapter 20. Then I skipped to ch 40 and read a few. Maybe it's just not my cup of tea, but some of the points in my review still stand tho
TheCoyoteGlove:Did… did you even the novel?
Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
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Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.
Mister_Writer:They called him smart after post-reading chapters 40+......??? Smh, the system would obviously give him everything from the start because it's the start. What's the purpose of being an assistant then if it can't do its job properly? OR maybe if you read past chapters 40+, you can see how MC rarely uses the system for his development and the additional reason why would the system help him. There's no point in making a slow-paced grinding story. You want a talk about day-to-day interactions in the classrooms with no plot progression after 100 chapters? This ain't that sort of novel and I'm not sorry if you are disappointed because there's no reason for me to be. I'd rather show the results of their every day school life rather than narrate it in a boring way. Of course, won't bother you if you won't read the rest. And for the 'generic cultivation', it's only a cultivation novel at the start since I have to explain the magic system or else people would complain (again) why I'm not explaining anything.