Review Detail of Ashton_A in My System Academy
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The concept is great and I like the idea behind it, but punishment systems are the worst because it basically requires the mc to follow the systems orders instead of actually doing anything on his own. Im not even going to get into the demi-human stuff. I kept getting thrown off by thinking that there wasn't a cliche, but then somehow the author throws it in last second as a surprise that you didn't see coming. I just didn't like how the novel played out even though it had a great idea, and the system was very inconsistent with its own logic. "We don't grade talent, we grade personality", "Only profound roots or higher can be taught".
My System Academy
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I think you misunderstood the context about talent. It is that the main focus of a student's development, in the case of this academy, is personality, not the student's power. They will naturally become stronger due to their talents (as required by the academy), so it no longer matters much how MC strategizes in his teachings to power them up, but more on how can he develop their personality so that they don't end up abusive of their powers or deranged in the future. AS for the punishment, what do you think the system should do when the MC fails? The task about helping the little girl not only involved her, but another captured royal descendant so failing on it will spread negative reputation around. Even if they don't know who he is, they know how he looks like, and the poachers, who will return alive back to their HQ, will spread the news. Remove the existence of the system and put MC on the same task. If he fails, the same outcome of failure will happen. The system narrates WHAT WILL HAPPEN on failure, not because that is what the system wills to do.
You can raise someone of any talent to be a good person, so the requirement of a spirit root of profound or higher is still stupid when you say that the academy only cares about personality and devious intent, if it puts a requirement on talent, it must care about talent. Also, no the mc would not lose reputation if he never tped there in the first place, like i said, not helping her. Your argument only stands if he tped there. Which im saying he shouldnt have.
Mister_Writer:I think you misunderstood the context about talent. It is that the main focus of a student's development, in the case of this academy, is personality, not the student's power. They will naturally become stronger due to their talents (as required by the academy), so it no longer matters much how MC strategizes in his teachings to power them up, but more on how can he develop their personality so that they don't end up abusive of their powers or deranged in the future. AS for the punishment, what do you think the system should do when the MC fails? The task about helping the little girl not only involved her, but another captured royal descendant so failing on it will spread negative reputation around. Even if they don't know who he is, they know how he looks like, and the poachers, who will return alive back to their HQ, will spread the news. Remove the existence of the system and put MC on the same task. If he fails, the same outcome of failure will happen. The system narrates WHAT WILL HAPPEN on failure, not because that is what the system wills to do.
Personally, my issue isnt that he did the quest because i woulda myself cause of the rewards. However, making a punishment and saying its only what would happen if hes not gonna do the quest and not a system made punishment is bad when he could not do the quest and get around the punishment in the way i stated.
No, my point still stands. It's not about raising a good person regardless of their talent or power. It's about raising highly potential students that are morally good people. Note that this is in the context under the situation that he is testing the recruits, not when they are already accepted into the academy. Tell me what would the MC do if he chances upon a devilish individual with extremely potent talent....... Look, I'm going to summarize it in one sentence under MC's perspective. "I know you are powerful and talented and all, but how does your personality fare to the potential power that you dearly hold?"
Ashton_A:You can raise someone of any talent to be a good person, so the requirement of a spirit root of profound or higher is still stupid when you say that the academy only cares about personality and devious intent, if it puts a requirement on talent, it must care about talent. Also, no the mc would not lose reputation if he never tped there in the first place, like i said, not helping her. Your argument only stands if he tped there. Which im saying he shouldnt have.
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Mister_Writer:I think you misunderstood the context about talent. It is that the main focus of a student's development, in the case of this academy, is personality, not the student's power. They will naturally become stronger due to their talents (as required by the academy), so it no longer matters much how MC strategizes in his teachings to power them up, but more on how can he develop their personality so that they don't end up abusive of their powers or deranged in the future. AS for the punishment, what do you think the system should do when the MC fails? The task about helping the little girl not only involved her, but another captured royal descendant so failing on it will spread negative reputation around. Even if they don't know who he is, they know how he looks like, and the poachers, who will return alive back to their HQ, will spread the news. Remove the existence of the system and put MC on the same task. If he fails, the same outcome of failure will happen. The system narrates WHAT WILL HAPPEN on failure, not because that is what the system wills to do.
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Mister_Writer:No, my point still stands. It's not about raising a good person regardless of their talent or power. It's about raising highly potential students that are morally good people. Note that this is in the context under the situation that he is testing the recruits, not when they are already accepted into the academy. Tell me what would the MC do if he chances upon a devilish individual with extremely potent talent....... Look, I'm going to summarize it in one sentence under MC's perspective. "I know you are powerful and talented and all, but how does your personality fare to the potential power that you dearly hold?"