Review Detail of OsirysOsprey04 in My System Academy

Nice novel The concept the author created are very good and are well implemented in the world background. There are some errors in the plot and the characters lack ‘ true emotion’, Another thing regard the MC, he’s not an idiot, but not that smart either. Try to give him a faster mental growth, the mask should heavily influence his other self. Moreover, the stronger the smart. He doesn’t need to be a genius, but if he can multitask and fight so well then he should not need the system reminder or fall in his own forgetfulness. All in all, it’s a very nice Novell that, if correctly improved, can be brought to a higher level. In my opinion the author have hope of writing top novel in the future, so keep it up.