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first: of all is this book a harem book second: is the mc a goody two shoes or a human who act like a normal human being like selfish etc...( I prefer the latter) third:will the mc act like a 7 year old kid because I'm done with this the MTL have brought me enough nightmares and traumas. thank you for reading this dear author and hope you continue.

first: this book is a harem second: He is in grey area. third:No he act as his usual age

then you have a new reader dear author

ew harem bye

why harem author? one relationship is hard enough with complications that might lead to break up due to the couple not understanding each other, and not spending enough time together. Most women are extremely needy and want a guy to pamper them, even the ones who like to rely on themselves would want someone they could complain and pour their heart out to chat and relax with. This is just one woman how are you going to make a relationship work with multiple women, with different personalities and needs. If your able to write a fantastic novel with character development, story Progression and world building, it could truly be a great novel since that would mean you properly developed the harem of girls, and it would also need to have certain realistic elements because no matter how powerful he his (unless he decides to outright manipulate their memories which will no longer be a proper relationship and you lose a decent amount of readers) if you decide to go the harem route you have to properly show how some girls won't like him as much since they want him to only like them the girls who are nobles or are from ancient families will think its only natural for a powerful man to have more than one woman, but even they might still be bitter. The point of this review reply is to tell you that romance is tricky enough with one woman nevermind two and you want 3 or more. end of my advice I hope you make use of it to improve your novel.

its a ok story 3 stars its better then mtl but not much the structure of the sentence makes you think its mtl but there is no wrong words. the mc is you average well above average chinese mc he knows how everything is cliche but wtill doesn't escape some tendencies but at least he knows the red flags lol so he is a bit smart at it but still not a smart mc. story is cliche of cliches not much to be said

Agreed, I don't understand why people love harems so much. 99.99999% of them are so annoying you want to blow out your brains while reading, while the ultra rare 0.00001% is just above acceptable levels of being obnoxious, irritating and annoying to read.

I want to read more but I have to ask, how does his time back on earth or whatever work. With the time dilation of 1 earth day is 100 cultivation world days so much can happen in the cultivation world during that time and what happens to his body in the cultivation world? Like does the previous owner take over or something?

No I read it in original language the time different is 100 day earth equal to 1 day in martial world so 1 year in earth equl three to four day in martial world. and when he is in martial world the earth will slowdown.

And about the owner he already death when Chen Ming took his body but to tell you the truth they just merge together

Original language? Isn't this an original, so why are you calling it a translation. Plus it really did say 100 days on the cultivation world is 1 day on earth so I really don't feel I can trust you with all of that.

There is a book in other languag that had more than 1000 chapters the author had the same pen name so I am confident

So the younger sister in the other world is going to enter the harem isn't she. Looking at the family Zhang Lin is the result of inbreeding and after Chen Yijin married Zhang Moyin, Chen Kongnan and Zhang Lin became step siblings. If that weren't enough Xiao Wen was adopted by Zhang Lin becoming Chen Ming's adopted sister. There is a clear pattern here so now that Zhang Lin is pregnant with a daughter this too must follow this pattern. At first I was confused about all this but when I thought deeper on this I discovered a deep af rabbit hole. I'm not complaining btw, just surprised at how messy this family tree is.

Well...That's about right!

why is you name not blue?

Does this story have explicit scenes or is it fade to black?

is there insect??? and Why don't u add tags??

What are the tags?

hey shouldn't you be in NETORARE section? what are you doing here?

then am going for it just what I needed but why are there no tags and more information about the book