Read till latest chapter, i.e., Chapter 16. Writing quality - 4/5 - Pretty good writing quality, the only thing I find myself dissatisfied with would be the interchangeable he/she. Tho since it was translated from Spanish to English, gave 4/5 and not 3/5 dur to the great efforts of Author as it is still much better than MTL. Story Development - 5/5 - Great development uptil now. Have to say that this ff ranks within my top 5 list. Character Design - 5/5 - Have to say the Character Design of MC is like looking at Aizen pre-betrayal as he plays around with Hinamori's feelings but on a much romantic tone. The fact that MC and his first waifu are manipulators really is an interesting part. If I had to say one thing I like, it would be a power couple and MC and Hotaru look like they can be one. Updating Stability - 5/5 - Great stability of updates at the moment. Keep up the great work Author 👍. World Background - 5/5 - I literally have not watched this anime/hentai or whatever it was supposed to be, but this ff really makes up for the regular slice of life theme. Overall - 4.8/5.0 - Have to say I'm very much looking forward to which direction this fic goes to, will it still have the present brilliance or will it just become another Harem fic on webnovel that would be forgotten.
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