Heyo, It's me Goose God. ~Writing Quality~ Pretty decent, already better than 90% of Authors. But nothing special. There were a few grammars mistakes, but they weren't Devil Slave System level, so I can tolerate it. ~Stability of Updates~ Better than my old fics, So I guess that's a plus? ~Story Development~ Honestly, pretty good. But I've noticed that most chaps are like... Nothing burgers, which are essential for any novel, but kinda bad when you don't upload frequently. Though I guess I can't judge since most of So, I'm a Dragon, What of it? is just filler. But I worded it out like it seems important. ~Character Design~ Immaculate, no need for discussion. ~World Background~ Inspired by Custom Made Demon King, I will assume it works like in that novel. Has potential if you have drive. Stop answering the reader's question in the actual book, answer it in the comments or something. No need for a long exposition, just have the characters themselves GRADUALLY discover it. Stop using the System as a way to convey info, that's boring and feels unearnt. But honestly? Really good, brother. I'm kinda inspired to make an Angel novel based on CMDK after this.
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LIKEAlso avoid other POVs at the beginning, I learnt this from all of the Shun complains
Thanks for the review, I wrote this novel when I was heavily depressed so I ain’t surprised that I misled didn’t like some parts that I wrote since I was pretty much just messing around 👀
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Ghost_Playing:Thanks for the review, I wrote this novel when I was heavily depressed so I ain’t surprised that I misled didn’t like some parts that I wrote since I was pretty much just messing around 👀image
