Review Detail of Slubbad in After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain

okay, I gave this novel a try, i like the idea, but the writer or translator needs to get someone to edit the english and the he needs to setup a better timeline of events.. wish you luck, but i will be dropping this novel.. its hard to read with all these grammer mistakes... and some times i need to go back and make sure I understood correctly.. and that is also a pain. thanks, and keep on trying... [img=recommend]