Review Detail of Not_a_mango in After reincarnating, I became a second generation villain

I have read till 45th chapter and have to say the grammar in this novel isn't preferable. I know this novel is made after the novel "I became a second generation villain"(which is a great novel 100% recommended). But the author of this novel has poorly displayed the plot. there are many plotholes but that can be ignored if you have patience. And the most disappointing thing is the "villain" is turning more into a protagonist. I don't know after chapter 45 but it has been mostly disappointing to me. Certain acts dosent suit a VILLAIN. Also the dialogues of supporting characters are too trash. I won't say anything anymore. But i bet this wouldn't quench your thirst for VILLAINS.