Review Detail of kolby549 in The True Way To Cultivate

The concept is great but story so far has felt extremely rushed. As of chapter 7 it is 200 years later and we know almost nothing about the main character, his parents, or the randomly "adopted" little brother. Also the fact the parents kidnaped some kid off the streets and then hit him hard enough to give brain damage didn't sit right with me. As a reader I hope you put more detail into the story things like why the main characters parents thought kidnaping a kid was a good idea. Thank you for the work you put into the story.