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This is pretty good though alot of it is forced like the whole I have to go to a whole nother world to find X(Why would X be in a another world wouldn't he been in some sort of personal realm or higher dimension) Wouldn't it make more sense if she was trying to become stronger to kill X after getting everything she can from the universe she's in instead of just going to different universe because the author wants to force the whole multiverse thing. There are a large amount a time skips in the beginning chapters. (1-6) I would appreciate a bit more details its also really messy. it's not the worst fanfic ever and I will continue to read! DON'T DROP DON'T DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP PLS DONT DROP IT Keep up the good work author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪🖖👇😀😃😄😊😁😑😕😞😎🤗🤫😠😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Tanya’s Revenge across the Multiverse

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Thanks for leaving a review! I appreciate the constructive criticism as well. This is indeed my first time writing after all. I’ll do my best to keep this story interesting to read!