Grammar is solid. Plot is good. Reading the authors note hoping for a manipulative mc, didn’t get that at all, I have not seen one person being manipulated so far, another point in authors note is that he would be ‘overpowered’ in hitting most people with one hit before down. Complete lies not one person has been beat down. He is also, you could say ‘tamed’ by her, even I. The story it says. ‘She has us whipped’. Not the good story I was hoping for, just not for me.
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