a bad write fic full of inconsitences and with a world background that is extremely bad and not though enough. author make it see extremely difficult to have a blue talent Pokemon but mc gain one extremely easy. we can t forget some more minor thing that make this fic difult to like. mc losing his memories and becoming nothing more than a of character,mc being a 10 year old that act like a adult but no one question,him having aura but his first and most important Pokemon being a normal type. author making only able to bond with one pokmeo only to change this later. resuming a fic with good potential but with a bad writer
Alan_demonic
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LIKEFor you to wast your time reading it and thinking its bad but still bother to write a review makes you a loser who wants attention if your so desperate for attention i hope u can handle bad attention personally i think this is a good story with a writer that's flourishing his writing skills while you probably haven't wrote anything just read a bunch of books like a nerd
DaoistcXPCun:i just read more of your comments on other books and you definitely seek attention if your that desperate as your parents for attention oh your parents probably neglected you that's probably why you seek attention so desperately loser