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Review Detail of SpideyBoy in Pokemon: Blood Bonds

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This story is a fresh one with good concept. The only reason I did not give a 5 star is because of the grammatical errors and the fact that MC has no memories of previous life. Also MC doesn't know much about Pokemon making this half AU instead of self interest😅. Not my cup of tea but will read it further to see where this goes. The concept is cool and Pokemon given to the MC are great too. I assume English is not Author's first language so I will leave it at that. Suggestion: Proof reading might help you a lot. For example in chapter one there is an error of 'whipped memories' instead of it being wiped memories. There are similar mistakes but nothing too worse, the grammar is readable. Sometimes these mistakes bother me a lot so a four star for now. I hope you revisit the chapters and try to correct the sentences or spelling errors.

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Pokemon: Blood Bonds

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