Let's be honest here. This fanfic is one of the most realistic I have ever seen. Yes. There are many fanfics that claim to have a very realistic world setting out there but most of them kind of felt too xianxia. Or should I say too dramatic? Those worlds have characters whose egos are higher than mount Everest and MCs that are too dramatic. Almost all characters are egoistical. This fanfic doesn't have none of these problems. Yes, there is brainless arrogant young master who picked a fight with MC but there are also smart ones. MC himself is not mature but also not childish. In my opinion, very realistic. I can't stand kids being really smart but it's to be expected since many kids in that camp are going to be legends in the future in their own rights. Overall, I appreciate the hardwork that is put into this fanfic and I just want to tell author that it wasn't wasted. You are creating a fanfic that have potential to become one of the most popular in webnovel. It's hard to keep the quality of your work in check but it's harder to keep updating chapters regularly and not give up. 10/10.

Here is what I think about this Fanfic: 1: The Writing and Grammar: Unless you are one of those who want everything PERFECT, the writing quality and grammar is one of the best in this FF. Author barely makes a mistake but also corrects it when its found. So 5 star there 2: Update Rate: we have 10 chapters so far within two days. But the author is going to drop the rate but it is still 2 chapters every other day which is really good. So 5 star there 3: Story Development: The story so far is going at a good pace and does not feel slow or too fast. Not a typical Riolu, Ralts or Dratini which makes the Mc too op too soon but rather his first pokemon had good potential yet he is working hard to make it strong. I mean the first fight was a perfect fight between two ten year old kids. so 5 Star there. 4: Character Design: I love the Mc, he is not stupid but also not a 'strategy guy.' Very realistic, I mean how many of us claim ourselves to calculate every step we take? It is great to see for once a normal Mc which is of course not stupid but not overly smart. Just a normal, like me. So I like it. 5 star there. 5: World Background: An interesting concept has been introduced and I am looking forward to how it goes. He at least have no system which I like. Just the foreshadowing of some ideas he has given to us is mind-blowing. But I will still give it 4 star there as those ideas have not bloomed yet and that the story is still going. To those who see this before reading, just a heads up, my personally opinion but I loved the ending of the prologue, couldnt have been better. To author: Just like the Mc says, "I don't give a flying Duck," I also want you to not give a Flying Duck about some who say it is not a good ff. It is a very good ff and you are a very good writer. if anyone tell you 'Not good grammar' tell em to write there own then. Smh, people really want perfect grammar when half of em can't write. Me included XD Best of luck for the ff, I hope you get success.

- Typical start with ROB offering wishes in exchange for karma points. - MC has ocular powers that can see the potential. Typical red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple - Basically, an OC, as he reincarnates without memories. - Above-average family. They aren't at the top in terms of resources. - MC is born in an original region that isn't canon like Hoenn, Kanto, etc. - New original dynamic: battle bond. The starter they get is super important. - A more dangerous world. People need weapons. But still modern? - Harem in the future chapters. - TM are easy to access and they can be bought for money. And the least thing I like, that lowered my original 4* into 3* - The next Top Generation of trainers are groomed and spoon-fed by the older generation of Old Clans, Professors, Champions, etc. You don't need to be talented to be at the top, you just need to be born in the right family, as they get the best possible Pokemon in terms of talent/potential. Maybe they are in the top 0.1 percent of people, but they exist in thin fic.

I would personally give it 4.8. This story never bored me personally and always made me look forward to the next chapter, which is almost never the case with other stories. Story Development: No problem and it flowed very well. Personally, I would be happy if there were more surprises in the story and the Mc had less plot armo. But overall it is very good and objectively very good. Fight: I personally don't really like the fights in the Pokemon anime and enjoy the more systematic fights like in the games. That's why I find the strength of scaling very unfamiliar and very unrealistic. Not for me although it's probably very good for readers who like the anime. Character Design: This is the best part of the story and all I can say is I'm impressed, author. Although I usually don't like when the mc is too young I can say that it probably couldn't be implemented any better. the character's dialogue is fantastic, even though we've only ever talked to 10 year olds so far. Conclusion: I like this story and the only reason why it is not a 5 is because it has too many clichés. For example: Has Steven and Cynthia as his only friends, although he doesn't have memories of his old life to influence that. Although the conclusion sounds a bit negative, I like this story a lot and it's easy to count the things I don't like about this story as the ones I like. To author: Good job and I hope you continue with this great story with a lot of potential.

OK 1st of all great novel, has everything so far that is needed in a good Pokémon fanfic however ... Look it's gonna be the 3rd time I'm saying this but this isn't a reincarnation novel! Just think the 1st chapter has idk a prologue, or something like that, that has nothing to do with the story, ***Spoiler alert *** cause the author just decided to literally kill the personality of the MC and gave up on all the advantages that a reincarnated person has

For now,, it's a 4 star. Mainly by the fact on how similar it is to Pokemon: Medieval Era Writing quality is alright but needs a lot of improvement. There are mistakes here and there but it's readable. Mainly the commas and some grammatical errors in the sentence.... I hope you proof read or use Grammarly to make it better Story development is decent until now but Character design needs some improvement. In some places the talk between characters is quite plain but would imagine this is your first time writing so I will go easy on that. Update stability is a 5 star as they seem pretty fast. World background would have been 5 if not for how every thing almost resembles Medieval Era fanfic on this site. The red eyes, ability, potential, and even the concept..... I was slightly disappointed with this but will surely re-review it after 30 chapters. I want to see more development so that I can see the improvement in various departments.

a bad write fic full of inconsitences and with a world background that is extremely bad and not though enough. author make it see extremely difficult to have a blue talent Pokemon but mc gain one extremely easy. we can t forget some more minor thing that make this fic difult to like. mc losing his memories and becoming nothing more than a of character,mc being a 10 year old that act like a adult but no one question,him having aura but his first and most important Pokemon being a normal type. author making only able to bond with one pokmeo only to change this later. resuming a fic with good potential but with a bad writer

This story is a fresh one with good concept. The only reason I did not give a 5 star is because of the grammatical errors and the fact that MC has no memories of previous life. Also MC doesn't know much about Pokemon making this half AU instead of self interest😅. Not my cup of tea but will read it further to see where this goes. The concept is cool and Pokemon given to the MC are great too. I assume English is not Author's first language so I will leave it at that. Suggestion: Proof reading might help you a lot. For example in chapter one there is an error of 'whipped memories' instead of it being wiped memories. There are similar mistakes but nothing too worse, the grammar is readable. Sometimes these mistakes bother me a lot so a four star for now. I hope you revisit the chapters and try to correct the sentences or spelling errors.

Just because I liked it, I'll take the time to write my review in English. This fanfic is eligible, the mc is nice and you can tell the author takes his time with the details and corrects if he finds any errors. I can only say my fellow readers, that another gem of pokemon fanfic was born. Enjoy and enjoy it.