the only good fanfic from his newer ones and its the least updated is a true dissapointment, the only real thing i feel like is the only thing from me disliking this is the very short chapters we have and the really slow update

Its only one chapter but I can assure you guys that this is a very good fanfic if that is anything to go by...Can't wait for the next chapters and I hope that you don't drop this book... The English is great and the writing is very readable....Also intresting plot and pacing... 5/5 recommended

soooooo, good I literally can't wait for more. one of the best marvel xmen fanfics I have read. really hope the author doesn't drop this one like his other ones. it would just be plain cruel to us, the readers

this is based on a very interesting idea, it's super cool I'm truly looking forward to more chapters.👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆👍🥇🏆

Updating stability WHERE ARE YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?;?!?!?!?!! HAREM!HAREM! HAREM! HAREM HAREM! ....................................................... ..

Cant you just made him into someone who’s has power like meta humans style welp even spiderman and the fantastic 4 got power not related to mutant or other superhero thru accident that already so over rated that anyone being reborn with power in marvel always have to be mutant

For the bio fuse thingy, I would recommend just spawn one and then let that one reproduce, make it so they live in mars and not in earth and be their Progenitor/King/Emperor/Leader and make all the spawned martians fanatics about the Mc like how humans are in 40k world. Pleeeaaasssseeee if not, I’ll call heresy!!!!!!!!!

It moved way too fast and had no real reason for the fast trust building and decisions made. Didn't make it past chapter 3. It weird because I usually drop stories because of the slow pace. This is the opposite. I felt like I skipped 5 chapters of character development between chapters 1 and 2. I know it's will be loved by many. it's just not my thing sadly because I love the idea of it. I've been reading fanfic for 10 years now, and I can tell you the stuff I loved in my first year of reading fanfic. l was way worse than this. Hopefully, it gets better in later chapters and with experience + time, but sadly, I won't be finishing this one. Hopefully, the author will continue updating this story for the many people who love it.

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it's a decent read , honestly if find the mc being able to master his powers so quickly as bullshit when it took martian manhunter according to him 1 million yrs ,but it didn't effect my review but in all seriousness, the fanfic is good , the mc is unique if i was to describe the mc his moral alignment is chaotic neutral , the author even left opportunity for the mc character development which is welcome on this app ,the only complaint I have is the updating scedule