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i feel like this book has a balance of good and bad there are a couple things you need to work on to get it to its true potential, but overall i think you have a stellar plot that's going places

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stary_nights
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just small things like grammar and pacing, but you can fix that with an editor

Stormzz:Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you think it's got good potential. Do you mind going into detail on the couple of things you mentioned?
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Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you think it's got good potential. Do you mind going into detail on the couple of things you mentioned?