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I see alot of the same in your novel as well the story is phenomenal but the spacing and writing quality hold it back slightly. I would suggest reading some authors books who have a similar pace and working from there. and adding a prologue chapter of an event to pull reader in.. keep it up
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Liked it!
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the spacing is to large it makes the writing choppy in my opinion and it stops the reader from flowing from one part to the other
Stormzz:Thanks for checking it out. Do you mind expanding on what you mean by spacing and writing quality?
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