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restful_sinsLv112yrrestful_sins

I see alot of the same in your novel as well the story is phenomenal but the spacing and writing quality hold it back slightly. I would suggest reading some authors books who have a similar pace and working from there. and adding a prologue chapter of an event to pull reader in.. keep it up

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Stormzz

Liked it!

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StormzzAuthorStormzz

Thanks for checking it out. Do you mind expanding on what you mean by spacing and writing quality?

2yr

restful_sinsLv11restful_sins

the spacing is to large it makes the writing choppy in my opinion and it stops the reader from flowing from one part to the other

Stormzz:Thanks for checking it out. Do you mind expanding on what you mean by spacing and writing quality?

2yr