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Lucien1
Lucien1Lv133yr
2022-01-10 22:11

The concept of the novel is interesting. It needs improvement on writing quality though; grammar and pronouns. For the characters, their traits are also interesting and I hope to see more developments. Overall, I think I had fun reading these early chapters. 🤔

My Wife is the Sect Leader

NathanPresotto
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3xXNotEXx3
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NathanPresotto
NathanPresottoAuthor

Hehe Autor falando~ Eu vou tentar digitar, merda eu uso celular e difícil [img=faceslap], se der certo esse romance eu vou ficar escrevendo.

3yr
Alucard_Black
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Very good...[img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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fernandovt
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Chibi_Zuobai
Chibi_ZuobaiLv4

the novels great some grammar errors here and there not new concept but interesting to say the least very engaging and im hooked very nice 4.0 cause update and world background not that complete

3yr
Eternal_devil
Eternal_devilLv15

🙂I like this story bUt bro repetiting linE frome otHer’s pOint of View 👍i am waiting for next cheaters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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LoboBrancoKing
LoboBrancoKingLv1

Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito, espero que continue assim

3yr
ZeBolaFodaBRs
ZeBolaFodaBRsLv1

História boa demais, e principalmente quando é feita por Br isso nos dá motivação para ler com gosto...Long Meili minha personagem preferida...Amei [img=update]

3yr
PhoenixNT
PhoenixNTLv12

Goood...Creative...😍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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