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Allshallbe_Bread
Allshallbe_BreadLv32yr
2022-07-23 04:33

I think it's a good novel. I just hope it dosent get abandoned like most fanfic's. .

Pub owned by the sin of sloth

septimus_son
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50 Chs

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septimus_son
septimus_sonAuthor

NOPE, it won't! I make this novel, because of exactly that reason. Mark my words this novel may not be very good, but it will be long and have a satisfying ending!

2yr
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Finnish_man
Finnish_manLv4

I say great i give 4 star just cus i havent read many omniversal shope kinda stuff and it interesting tho chapd too short but no hate tho its amezing in my opinion tho i relle read anything that i find funny

2yr

YourFriend1yReader
YourFriend1yReaderLv3

Its pretty early so there is not much to review but non the less. I really look forward to seeing this progress! It is your first novel so I cant wait to see where you take it.

2yr
AwfulAbsoluteSweet
AwfulAbsoluteSweetLv4

I’ve read the first 13 chapters but I didn’t really vibe with it. So little was going on that I was bored out of my mind and only continued to see if anything would change. Aside from the few memes here and there I didn’t really find anything compelling… Author, I hope you continue writing and improving your craft.

2yr
PRiMoRiDiaL
PRiMoRiDiaLLv4

Im not surprised that it got dropped. All the author done is just say whatever he want no story in a story what a joke

2yr
Benny_gold
Benny_goldLv4

You couldn’t get anything right son of sloth is supposed to be lazy and you had him saving people and partisapating in a tournament terrible character design you havent updated in 5 months and he supposed to be Based around his pub but most of this is outside of it.

1yr
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