Review Detail of CouchPotatoDandy in DC: REBORN AS ZEUS (OMNIVERSE)

I only managed to read up to chapter 5 before my brain burned itself out... The grammar is so bad it's amazing. I know the author said that English is his second language, so don't expect much, but even when readers give him comments to fix, he doesn't correct the writing... In any case, the concept of the story looks nice and I would love to read it in the future when it undergoes editing.