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2022-11-13 03:05

Story was so perfect.. but everything went wrong in the end! ML died!! I cant believe it 😪😪 after reading such a good story.. the ending is so bad!! please continue the book...or change the ending.. it's heartbreaking 😭

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chizuai
chizuaiLv1

There's a chapter where she just hurts that QQ's face, but is that all? Think about it: the original owner suffered a lot, and now the current owner, who is the FL, almost loses her life because of that QQ. She really did put that QQ in prison in the beginning, but it was just easily released. Wow, I don't think the villainess here is punished enough by the MC.

chizuai
chizuaiLv1

I'm actually really disappointed with the FL. I didn't expect her to be a super genius or overpowering, but I see that she is wise. However, it's useless when Quqi and other girls keep attempting to kill her. There's a lot of evidence, but they are dismissed by the MCs as if nothing happened. The FL almost lost her life, but she can't even punish those people who wanted to kill her. They still have the time and freedom to enjoy shopping and curse her. This fact is really, really disappointing. I don't know if this is the author's strategy to prolong the story, but it doesn't make sense anymore. The FL doesn't punish them or take revenge for their attempts to kill her; she just allows them, and it doesn't make sense at all.😒😒😒

chizuai
chizuaiLv1

If do you think it's perfect. Ok. But in reality it was not there's a lot of scenes that really really doesn't make sense the FL is really really kindheart to just released her enemies easily without her torturing them when they deserve to be tortured. Mentally and physically. But they not. It's really really UNSATISFYING! 😅

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