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2022-01-15 09:37

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It is wrong to abuse psionic abilities in a Dungeon? Danmachi FF

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sir_wolenstien
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I get your doing this for free and writings your hobby, but the English is jumbled at best and incoherent at worst. Maybe try using a program like grammarly and when you rewrite a chapter go over every sentence and ask yourself does this make sense? If I was an English teacher you would have gotten a d-, the only thing stopping the F is you tried In the first place

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Darnelljoe
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Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, I'm not ashemed of my english but of the fact I still comit mistakes in PT-BR Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy, Yayyyy,

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