Sorry I can’t enjoy it when the chapyers are only 800words it dosnt do anything to me but feels like I’m reading a kids book also the grammar needs work

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Love the fic

Good start into the Story. I think it will be a wish fulfilment story so if you like this kind of books you schuld read it. I hope the author can hold the updating stability, there are already to many lost gems in the webnovel library.

Dr_Dred here's another starwars fanfic i thought of you could do A Star Wars Fanfic where it is two years before the Naboo blockade. Our MC Jack Sandmark after successfully passing a trial by a God gets put into this Galaxy after he dies from a heart attack in his previous world. Now in his second life, he strives to live his life to the fullest. Can he build up his Kingdom in this Galaxy while bringing peace and prosperity to the Galaxy, or will he be overwhelmed and succumb to the Darkness. Home Base Planet: Lothal Harem Padme Amidala Duchess Satine Kryze Queen Julia Bo-Katan Kryze Nala Se Miraj Scintel Aura Sing Mother Talzin Rook Kast

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A very fun story that was suprising in the fact it got through all the big stuff in only 163 Chapters.

One of the most well done and actually completed Star Wars stories I've ever read. I may have read better but none of them are completed nor even updated in some time. It's stories like this one however that make me want to write my own stories even if they are terrible just to write the ideas my own mind generates. This story was worth sticking with all the way through even when I felt it got a bit too descriptive once or twice, I understand being descriptive is often necessary to bring a world to life and thanks to that there are no loose ends left at the end of the story which is hard enough to do for most people who write as not everyone has their own opinions of what counts as a loose end. At the end of the day the story was wonderful and kept my own attention well enough. And truly not every story is ever really finished because the readers might often be interested in seeing more of the story after completion but if authors focused on a single story even after its completion then they wouldn't have time to write other stories that interest them that could be even as good or even better than what they just finished. If you think about it this is where fan fiction stems from. Fans of a story wanting to continue or rewrite a story they love even if said story itself is also a fan fiction. This is how great fan communities are made and in turn expand the universe of the favored story. This is where I put this story in my own rankings of fan fiction. A story strong enough to inspire others to continue it in their own ways. Truly a great read and the first fan fiction I have read alongside through to its completion that is not an eternally ongoing eastern cultivation novel. Which makes it even better as I don't have to wonder if it will ever end and if I should just read something else. Great story and I wish the author luck and success in their future stories!