Hello dear readers🙏🥰 i hope you guys can enjoy my work. Give me review, and collect my book for new update🤩🙏 thank you very much..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Saw your book at the WPC and decided to give it a shot, I honestly love the cover, but the writing kinda seems dry or something. It's obvious English isn't the author's first language. The first paragraph was also dull, I suggest you show rather than tell and writing the sounds of certain stuff like the ambulance, tilt tilt, tap tap, weooo weooo isn't the best idea as it takes away readers emotion, I think it might work with tv shows but for writing Nah, some mistakes of tenses too as well as the dialogues doesn't seem natural to me at all. Nevertheless, I love the plot of revenge and reincarnation I think getting an editor is a must other than that the book is lit.

Oh my god, this story is sooooo goodddd[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰

Your writing sooo good. i'd like to read it again and again[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Soooo cuteee annchiiii...🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Cants stop read thiss. oh gosshhh😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Omgod. Look at that couple. make me wanna drug them together. . Plisss be tgherrrrr😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋