As with the start of most novels, it's missing a few crucial components at the start, motivations, conflicts, and, as expected, no idea what role the MC will have beyond "bring glory to the family name. These are the only issues so far, and that's a great thing. A truly explosive opening, short but entertaining. And post-reincarnation, while not much has been set up, it's a solid introduction into where the MC is and what is demanded of him in his new life.
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