Shameless author review, but with a grain of salt. I am not the best writer out there, but I do wish to finish this story. My updates may not be stable, but I plan to release 3-4 chapters every week for sure. As for the story, I think its fun, the MC is a bit deranged, he sometimes talks breaking the 4th wall, but don't worry that's just to add to this crazy aesthetic. The story is mainly going to focus outside cannon storylines, but later on I will definitely rope in Hogwarts and the British isles into it. I was really inspired by the fantastic beasts movies as well. So expect to see some original spells and some fun fights ahead. I will try to make it as interesting as possible for you guys. Don't forget to leave your own review if you liked it or even if you didn't like and have some suggestions you want implemented. I will be sure to reply!

This is probably the most unique and well thought out hp ff that I've read in my 7 years of using Webnovel (ps this is a second account forgot the password of my main😭) (pss spoiler ahead -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------) I personally love that u didn't for the generic starting point of every hp ff out there most hp ff's don't even engage with other countries or just straight up time skip it and about 90% of hp ffs out here is just Britain and f hogwartscause everyone's a unimaginative b

I think you’re doing well with this story. Something I would like to point out with the writing is that it doesn’t focus on the present events, rather it leans more in the inner thoughts. The issue with the writing at the moment is the constant monologue after every event. It disrupts the dialogue and inhibits the flow. Furthermore, it’s really long. It’s like those anime fights where, within each slash and each second, there’s an entire conversation between the protagonist and enemy. I would recommend you cut down on the length and focus more on the current in each dialogue. The plot is enjoyable at the moment. Good job.

This fanfic is pretty good, from an objective point of view. The writing quality is great, and the author is doing a good job of developing his own world-building. Subjectively, however, I personally don't like it all that much. It doesn't read like a harry potter story at all, and after 25 chapters we haven't been introduced to a single canon character, and the MC is still a brat below Hogwarts age. It's just not what I'm looking for in a HP fanfiction.

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Начало понравилось, надеюсь дальше будет так же. Будет ли он изучать колдомедицину, темную магию, фехтование? Он будет анимагом? Как тебе идея сделать собственною палочку, будет ли у него фамильяр?

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Very good though , I love everything about mc and nothing disgusts me about his character, maybe this story will be slow because he doesn't have a system that can help him in growing