Que: What would you expect from a good ff with villain MC? that too in Overlord universe? Ans: PERFECTION Writing quality: Good, no major mistakes, fun and easy to understand. Story development: What do think you will get in a ff with villain MC? Smart manipulative MC. Story starts off pretty akward with chilché trope but the idea is quite unique with unlimited potential. Character designs: Smart manipulative MC with brain. Although I don't like the first chapter, but other than that, it's almost perfect. The MC is like a cold manipulative person and plans out his things rather than let it on luck. Updating stability: Good. Regular updates. World background: What else do you want when you're in Overlord universe? OVERALL: One of the best Overlord Fanfic that I have read. Although it would be better if there are more chapters. Hope author continues this masterpiece.
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LIKESR_2027:Have you ever read Chinese novels, specially those MTL? Now compared to those where you could not even read a whole paragraph, this is a lot better. Atleast you can read and correct the sentence by itself. And beleive me, I have read so many chinese novels/ffs that my mind had installed a autocorrect function, so for me, it's far more better to read. As for how he is mascot and wanted to be ra'ped by a pedo? I haven't read about it...image
Have you ever read Chinese novels, specially those MTL? Now compared to those where you could not even read a whole paragraph, this is a lot better. Atleast you can read and correct the sentence by itself. And beleive me, I have read so many chinese novels/ffs that my mind had installed a autocorrect function, so for me, it's far more better to read. As for how he is mascot and wanted to be ra'ped by a pedo? I haven't read about it...
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MIKMIK:pretty sure any who managed to read mtl fics will somehow gain a nerfed grammerly power
"Writing quality: Good, no major mistakes, fun and easy to understand" Bruh, I don´t know what you have been reading, but if you find no major mistakes in this FF then you should start reading other novels/FF and compare them. Yes, it is understandable and readable, but there is a mistake in almost every paragraph.
you are right about the automatic grammar correction. I was just thinking, I should be happy or sad about it.
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you are right about the automatic grammar correction. I was just thinking, I should be happy or sad about it.
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