Review Detail of naruto_plunder_8224 in Surviving in Woman's world as a novel villain.

World Background is nice Character design is good Story development - is really nice. I liked the way author portrays characters and the way they interact with each other. It does not feel like they are just add-ons to the story (something like talking like a predetermined program) I also like the comedic relief from time to time, and the lemons are just a bonus. What i dont like seeing is halfway through the chapter, somewhere between 88+ the grammar became clunky and gibberish. I couldn't understand the meaning of what they are saying even with my brain auto-translating. It kills my mood as well as my reason to read the remaining chapters, I hope the author re-edit the chapters where there are so many wrong grammars.