Review Detail of Fortunate_Soul in Naruto: “The Strongest Ever” (currently rewritten)
Review detail
Very cliche story. MC is extremely talented and has a huge chakra pool. His parents are very kind and loving. Danzo is the obviously evil guy and decided to attack them because 'they're hindering his plans'. Aside from this, the Root anbu laugh, explain their strategies, their own identities and talk a lot. Completely unlike the Canon Root anbu who are emotionless killing machines. All in all, this fanfic was a waste of time. Wouldn't recommend it to anyone.
Naruto: “The Strongest Ever” (currently rewritten)
Lostintales
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You’re reading a fanfic so cliches are bound to appear I even made a gag saying how he’s a cliched protagonist. But, i believe Danzo obstructing them was clearly Explained in the story. I've seen a lot of people having an issue with the arc against the root, but the only person who conversed in that arc was Shikuro. Now, Shisui was a member of the root so are you implying he never smiled or spoke normally? He did, reason being they were adept and quite powerful in their fields before Danzo acquired them as root anbu. Making them not go through the usual root training and giving them more control over their emotions. Shikuro was a same case. Noone else spoke or conversed in that arc other than him. And as for revealing plans, he did none, he only did reveal his source when he thought he killed Kyo. To ignore all the positive aspect of the story and rating solely based on few stuff felt a bit harsh to me, but it’s fine. I respect your take and Thank you very much for reading and even bothering to review!!!!
Don't be discouraged author, you are very talented in what you do, up there with the likes of Corn etc.. anyways I like the way the arc played out except the father being crippled, I understand him being injured but I would've prefer him unable to use his chakra rather than being unable to walk, but who knows what you plan in the future. This is a 5 star novel to me, and I will continue to support it.
Lostintales:You’re reading a fanfic so cliches are bound to appear I even made a gag saying how he’s a cliched protagonist. But, i believe Danzo obstructing them was clearly Explained in the story. I've seen a lot of people having an issue with the arc against the root, but the only person who conversed in that arc was Shikuro. Now, Shisui was a member of the root so are you implying he never smiled or spoke normally? He did, reason being they were adept and quite powerful in their fields before Danzo acquired them as root anbu. Making them not go through the usual root training and giving them more control over their emotions. Shikuro was a same case. Noone else spoke or conversed in that arc other than him. And as for revealing plans, he did none, he only did reveal his source when he thought he killed Kyo. To ignore all the positive aspect of the story and rating solely based on few stuff felt a bit harsh to me, but it’s fine. I respect your take and Thank you very much for reading and even bothering to review!!!!
Man no anbu talk between fights be it root or normal anbu They are black ops operative They come They kill They go.
Lostintales:You’re reading a fanfic so cliches are bound to appear I even made a gag saying how he’s a cliched protagonist. But, i believe Danzo obstructing them was clearly Explained in the story. I've seen a lot of people having an issue with the arc against the root, but the only person who conversed in that arc was Shikuro. Now, Shisui was a member of the root so are you implying he never smiled or spoke normally? He did, reason being they were adept and quite powerful in their fields before Danzo acquired them as root anbu. Making them not go through the usual root training and giving them more control over their emotions. Shikuro was a same case. Noone else spoke or conversed in that arc other than him. And as for revealing plans, he did none, he only did reveal his source when he thought he killed Kyo. To ignore all the positive aspect of the story and rating solely based on few stuff felt a bit harsh to me, but it’s fine. I respect your take and Thank you very much for reading and even bothering to review!!!!
Lostintales:You’re reading a fanfic so cliches are bound to appear I even made a gag saying how he’s a cliched protagonist. But, i believe Danzo obstructing them was clearly Explained in the story. I've seen a lot of people having an issue with the arc against the root, but the only person who conversed in that arc was Shikuro. Now, Shisui was a member of the root so are you implying he never smiled or spoke normally? He did, reason being they were adept and quite powerful in their fields before Danzo acquired them as root anbu. Making them not go through the usual root training and giving them more control over their emotions. Shikuro was a same case. Noone else spoke or conversed in that arc other than him. And as for revealing plans, he did none, he only did reveal his source when he thought he killed Kyo. To ignore all the positive aspect of the story and rating solely based on few stuff felt a bit harsh to me, but it’s fine. I respect your take and Thank you very much for reading and even bothering to review!!!!