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Review Detail of Harris_Kirik in Naruto: The Great Swordsman

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Harris_Kirik
Harris_KirikLv22yrHarris_Kirik

I liked all you novels so far author-san. But I have to say that this one is my favorite as of now. You have truly improved in writing quality and story development, 👍 The reason I can recommend this novel to all Naruto and one-piece fans are two main reasons: 1. The ability he got from the system is limited (Mihawk abilities and lightning chakra) 2. He only had a system for two years( novice period for training). Once he completed the transfer of the two main powers the system Dissapered (bravo author 👍) Now I understand what was the problem with all the other system fanfics. As the story continues the system becomes the bottomless wish Fuflliment well. Then the story usually becomes bad.... But you author are really a genius. A trial period system. Such a simple solution to limit the MC and balance his abilities, truly an amazing accomplishment💪💪💪 Well done, hope you complete this novel as well since I think it has the greatest potential of all of your novels. 😎👍👍👍

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eatingbooks
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trial period system ... I like the idea of it vary much.[img=update]

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

cool if you like weak to strong mcs