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well story is ok ok but the mc dream to make harem in this world is weird first he is human not devil angel etc 2. it ruin your slice of life feeling like catching girl like pokemon he has no other intention rather than catching girl mean 2 3 girls is ok but this is to much i don't understand 😅 well that is folks
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I think you should remove the word mc here and wrote ‘ I ' instead, I think its not mc but your dream anyways most of the horny people wanted to have a harem now days. ( just joking don't take this seriously ).
I77OI3:Although, I don't know if my word make sense but I already write in chapter 1 without saying directly about MC's dream. MC's dream is to make a harem with his favorite waifus. MC is an otaku, his frustration in real life goes to his hobby. There is no big intention since MC can easily fall to a woman. Also he doesn't want a normal life in his second life so... yah. I will try to upgrade the way I tell. Thanks for review (◡ ω ◡)
Although, I don't know if my word make sense but I already write in chapter 1 without saying directly about MC's dream. MC's dream is to make a harem with his favorite waifus. MC is an otaku, his frustration in real life goes to his hobby. There is no big intention since MC can easily fall to a woman. Also he doesn't want a normal life in his second life so... yah. I will try to upgrade the way I tell. Thanks for review (◡ ω ◡)
