Excellent work, refreshing to have a 'reincarnation/rebirth/back-in-time' story such as this. I am curious about Yu's knowledge of the future and hope to see some in-depth explanations on what to expect with the upcoming apocalypse/virus. The potential of the world and story development has me anticipating the continuation of the story. I love the planning we are seeing from Yu on how to protect those she cares for and am terrified to see her potentially lose people down the road (which is a sign of how much I enjoy the writing and characters themselves). I believe characters could be fleshed out a bit further but this has been an excellent introductory set of chapters and character design/potential for growth/development is clear. Other than that minor thought and a desire to see updated content (while recognizing and respecting the author's focus on other stories currently), I would say I am quite pleased with how things are turning out within this story.
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