Item: SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE
Rating: 4.8
Author: VeraMera

VeraMeraLv102yr

2022-10-24 15:00

A great read! You can tell where they got the inspiration from, but the author made it their own storyline. Good pacing and easy flow of the story. Hoping for more chapters! Keep up the good work :)

SCORCHING BLACK VULTURE

MansonFD7

4.7

59 Chs

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MansonFD7Author

Thanks for your review. In fact, I always done tons of tweaking to make it easier to read and tried to perfecting the story of this book. Your welcome by the way ヾ(≧▽≦*)o

2yr

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