Review Detail of Akikan in The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

(this is a review from chapter 105)This story started out really good with 5 stars in everything except character design, What made the rating drop is the constant introduction of new characters which feels forced, overwhelming and underwhelming at the same time. overwhelming because of the huge amount, a huge cast of characters isnt always bad but it needs to be handled properly and without rushing. underwhelming because of the amount of focus each character is given, after you reach a certain amount of characters in a novel it starts being hard to give each one enough attention, which the author is clearly struggling with , to the point that some main characters in this novel lack a personality or background. Dont get me wrong, this is one of the best fan fics i've ever read even with the problems mentioned above. True rating:4.3/10