Review Detail of kurit_kun in The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel
Review detail
Now that I reached 100th chapter it's time for author's review and shamless 5 star is mendatory. Firstly first 10 chapters or so aren't the greatest and I get. Probably the most people dropped around these chapters, lol, but in my humble opinion the quality goes up afterwards. You are probably wondering why they dropped so early on. Well... I commited a grave sin of writing annoying system because I wanted to write some character development and after 10th chapter it gets better or at least that's what people are saying. Secondly my writing format may not be for everyone so if you're not a fan of script format then save yourself some trouble and don't start reading it. Besides these two things iI think the story tunred out quite nice and if you also think so leave positive review.
The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel
kurit_kun
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This is multiverse and he travels to the first world in chapter 49 but he comes to the original world afterwards
Darkened7:is this multiverse? (If so when does he travel?) Or one of those where mc is in one world but there's a lot of crossovers?
kurit_kun:This is multiverse and he travels to the first world in chapter 49 but he comes to the original world afterwards
when rewriting can you give him unlimited loss works and a bunch of cool powers that make him op but not to op that it make sense.i know it's asking aloft but after reading th fanfic like 9 times I still love it compared to the other trash on webnovels so pretty pls make emiya a op sun of a gun and if possible can you make him learn other types of magecraft like Minecraft,gemcraft,jewelcraft or even displacement magecraft since the new emiya soul will be talented in other things as Well.but you do you.and if the harem has servants inchuled could you make nobu one ols
kurit_kun:I'm planning on rewriting it...image
Dethpool_Mlg:but the system was funny in the beginning then she became boreing and rarely if ever interacted with the mc
I was reading this on my old account and stopped when his childhood friend or something from his past life was introduced, him not even wanting to talk to her made me think she betrayed him in some way. I don't need to know the actual reason or anything like that, but it's not some childhood friend ntr story, right?
No, nothing like that. And it's not like he didn't want to talk to her but he didn't know she was there to begin with.
xSanctity:I was reading this on my old account and stopped when his childhood friend or something from his past life was introduced, him not even wanting to talk to her made me think she betrayed him in some way. I don't need to know the actual reason or anything like that, but it's not some childhood friend ntr story, right?image
kurit_kun:No, nothing like that. And it's not like he didn't want to talk to her but he didn't know she was there to begin with.
kurit_kun:No, nothing like that. And it's not like he didn't want to talk to her but he didn't know she was there to begin with.
Oh, I do recommend putting one of the images in the aux chapter if you can. I usually keep it open so I can get a quick look at the characters if I forget what they look like, I imagine other people do too. If you can't, I can just screenshot the cover pics and put them in a comment?
kurit_kun:The cover shows Ryoto. There's also another version on ScribbleHub.
