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TLM but slower. Too much "Player" POV ruin the rhythm and the progression is so slow , like, i've read 30 chapter and in all this time Mc is still weaker than random lvl 1 player... the 'funny' part of the novel take too much time and overall the novel go in so much way at the same time that the story just stagnate . Also same joke than in TLM wich just tiring to me cuz i already know them

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In the mind of an NPC

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Just try reading till the end of first arc, I know early arcs are slow, but its in an attempt to set some stuff up. Just give it a try...