Review Detail of Ayanko_Chan in In the mind of an NPC
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Well this book is good if you want to read but maybe not me because mc to weak and expose to much danger in the beginning of the story. Make him look like player that npc. Sometimes the main point of the story is confusing me to the point of drop this book. The plot where he reincarnated?transmigration?i don't know!. To confuse because mc previous worlds or memory before became npc. That all i have and I'm apologize for the author of the book if you see this as insult or anything bad. I just review this out of my heart content♥. Keep your hard work and don't let your feelings hurt because of my comments ＼(>o<)ノ
In the mind of an NPC
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Just wait for another 5 chapters... I will say, it got potential and I didn't want it to turn into another power fantasy. His weakness is long gone in the latest chapter and moreso in the upcoming chapter. I wanted to make it so he earned his powers and wanted to show how dangerous situations like these can get and how memories of a normal person is not that great when it comes to details. MC is using what is at his hand and by end of first arc, he will stand up on his own feet. And that end is coming soon too. I know it may get frustrating, but give it a chance. This story may lack instant gratification, but its done to shape up MC who used to be a selfish common human man, who was never special. Think of it as a different kind of self insert fantasy, where stakes are real and people around you are way smarter due to their own life experience.