So far, the story seems really interesting, with two other settings that have as much potential as the current one (I'm looking at you, Beast Planet). The writing quality could be improved, but there's no major problem. It's perfectly readable and fluid in a sense. I'd definitely recommend giving it a chance for any indecisive new reader. Try it!
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