Review Detail of bunnyrabbit in In the mind of an NPC

Where should I start... Okay first, the plot is really good, it has a lot of promise. The way that the author describes every scene is so vivid that I can almost see it flash in front of my eyes. And it's not an empty read either, you can feel certain emotions as you continue. But what I like best is the MC. He's not overpowered from the get-go, he's an NPC that has the tenacity to survive. I think this will be a good ride so I'll add this to my library. Keep updating, author!