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Review Detail of Basiun in White Online

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Basiun
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Your bog-standard MMO novel, now with guns! Grammar & spelling isn't quite up to par. You can understand what the author intended to write, but intentions and what is actually written very much differ in multiple passages per chapter. Author has no sense of scale and uses numbers that are far too big or extreme when compared to logic. I coudln't find much character design in this apart from how everybody everywhere seems to react to how amazing the MC is in one way or the other. That is the role of every other character than the MC. To bring up how awesome the guy is. Everything in this novel moves far too fast, which is a common trend in these kinds of novels. A game is out for 2-3 days and suddenly half the people playing seem to know intricate details about obscure 1-off places as if they've been living there for years? It's about as bad as xianxia characters knowing events that "only happen every 1 million years" even though they're roughly 20 years old themselves.

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