After writing 100 chapters, I decided to do a new author review. I have gotten a great response so far, and that gave me a boost of motivation to keep writing this; and after writing 100 chapters, I already know that the story is only beginning, there is so much left to write, and I have a hunch that it will take easily over 1000 chapters to complete, maybe even 2000. Second, I have gotten a few toxic messages about how MC's looks, because he looks girly and is around 170cm, so I have gotten a lot of messages about making him taller, etc., and that may happen or may not, I am not going to spoil it, but I have reasoning for his looks and his height, and none of those will change before I am ready to reveal the reasoning of his looks and what happened in his childhood. Third, I have written a lot of mystery, and I enjoyed it immensely. I have given a few subtle hints on the chapters that might reveal why MC is different from the rest, and that White Online isn't as normal as it seems at first, so good luck on finding those. Fourth, I have seen a few theories made by my readers, and I am sometimes terrified of how well you guys found out about some things which still haven't been revealed yet; it is nice to see all kinds of theories, even though some aren't correct, but it is still nice to read those. Fifth, about a love interest. Some of you guys might have read the synopsis and seen the tags, but I will still say this. This will be a No Harem novel with only one love interest, and even if some of you guys like Harem, you guys should still try and who knows, some of you might like it. I decided to lock the chapters only around the 53th chap so that everyone has enough time to read and find out if they like it enough to keep paying for more chapters. Thanks, everyone for reading, and I hope you guys support me in this very long journey.

exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen

I was scrolling through new novels and found this novel. I like vr novel so I decided to read this. My first thing to compliment is the writing quality. 5/5 no grammar mistakes, fight scenes are not long. The world building is pretty good as more and more info are given. Keep it up author

(Review 150 chapters+) Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast. Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated. SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER): In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy?? On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda. Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.

I am your biggest fan. Never forget that. I made you to who you are today. Top 1 fan contribution - Entrail_JI That aside, story really good.

I have gotten to about ch 195 on outside sites. This book is decent in both background and writing. However the character is just out of whack. He is straight but seems gay for the whole first 100 chapters. He is supposed to be super smart but never shows it. The skills he receives are broken for the first and doesn’t make sense. If I remember right the icy shot skill has a percent chance of working works every time when the mc wants it to happen!!! What is the point of the others then!!! Its just constantly annoying to hear the author say he is a genius when the mc shows zero signs of those traits. He even seems to be dense and slow with some of his reactions. Archers were able to jump along branches within the beginning days and the mc is a genius just from doing the same thing??!?!!! That’s not genius if many others are able to do the same!!! Don’t tell us he is a genius, show us!!!! He just seems like a regular protected child that doesn’t know the world well. Otherwise, love the story and the world building. Just take away the genius point and you will have a good story on your hands author.

I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style. While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book. "Isaac likes to sing. he enjoys it. Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't. Alice likes her elder brother." Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story. The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences

This review is after reading chapter 151 and as I’m writing this I am nowhere close to being caught up. So some of the things I’m talking about could have changed by now. Alright so the novel overall is pretty good but it has some distinct problems that tend to annoy readers, including me. The story overall has an interesting premise. The characters are interesting and I don’t really dislike any of them(except for the ones your supposed to dislike of course.) The story does tend to fall into some cliches and some situations that don’t make sense at times. Though it’s not really possible to make a completely unique story and for the most part the hiccups aren’t that bad. Now the story itself doesn’t have to many problems, but the ones that it does have show up often enough to be a problem. 1) The author’s first language isn’t English and it’s pretty easy to tell. I personally don’t really care to much but I know it’s a turn off for a lot of people so just pointing it out. 2) In the story the Mc is called a genius by multiple characters as well as the author. This isn’t true at all as he’s shown to be average or slightly above average during the story. (and don’t even get me started on his eq.) The characters calling him a genius is fine as those that do are normally biased and it makes sense coming from them. I would also like to say that this isn’t necessarily a bad thing. The mc doesn’t have to be a genius for a good story. There are plenty of good stories with mcs that are just smart, average, and even ones where the mc is a little slow. I personally think it’s more accurate to call him talented as he’s been confirmed confirmed to learn things fast. 3) This is related to my last point kinda but the author tends to make the Mc not realize certain things that are pretty obvious for the sake of the story. For one it kinda breaks immersion and 2 it further makes calling him a genius seem wrong. As I said before, there’s nothing wrong with your Mc not being a genius, but if based on previous experiences they would be able to figure something out either let them figure it out or change it a bit to where it makes sense that they wouldn’t. The worst part about this one is that within like a minute I can normally think of a small change in the situation or dialogue to make it make sense why he wouldn’t know. It makes it feel like the author isn’t putting that much effort in the story when he doesn’t really come off that way. So overall it’s a really good story premise and I feel like if those problems were fixed the story would be so much better and would probably be a story I’m extremely eager to read instead of just enjoying.

Pros World building Loving family Vr game mechanics Cons MC character is not consistent. He is supposedly a genius but I haven’t seen any such thing from him. Being a genius, he is also oblivious to females around him I don’t mind stories with or without harem. But this one is obviously going for the non harem route with Luna as the fmc but leading lot of girls to the MC. Amanda is not properly resolved