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Archonstine
ArchonstineLv53yr
2021-12-30 22:27

FINALLY!!! Someone competent enough to write a decent story. The grammar is perfect, character development is great and the inner monologues are impeccable. The dialogues actually flow through smoothly and don't border on cringy like almost every single fanfic on this platform. All in all, great job with this. The only other Spider Man/SI in MCU that was somewhat decent was the Spider by imjusttryingtofindmyway, before the mc became the very definition of sluttiness. Sincerely hope, that doesn't happen here. Anyways, keep it up.

MCU: The Greatest Spider

Peter_B_Parker
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3 Chs

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Scientistx
ScientistxLv6

nothing wrong with sluttiness in my opinion he atleast tried ti make relationships dynamic and alive unlike most harems

3yr
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Darkwolf280
Darkwolf280Lv4

i will give it a 5 star thinking this is a blackcat ship story, if this the greatest of all spider then he should have some great girls with him, so please i plead you to blackcatxspidey ship,

3yr

Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5

Just trying to get some exp. Just trying to get some exp. Just trying to get some exp. Just trying to get some exp. Just trying to get some exp.

3yr
Duskstar
DuskstarLv5

Still early to say is the best, but so far (3 chapters in) i can say is one of the good one, good grammar, good dialogues, MC is not dumb, is not trying to build a crazy harem (yet, hope it stay like that) overall good, give some love to this.

3yr
CanRead
CanReadLv2

This story is simply phenomenal. The writing is impeccable and has little to no mistakes on it. The author seems to have a clear plan in mind for the story, so you can rest assured that the story wont go all over the place later on or confuse you. The one thing that's got me slightly and i mean slightly worried, is the fact that MJ would be the love interest and not someone like Gwen Stacy or Scarlet Witch or Jessica Jones, but even if the author does pick MJ, she'll be well written. I have something else to say to the author, would Spider-Man meet up with Jessica Jones/Jewel on patrol and have them become friends?, because I feel like they'd be very good ones. All in all, an amazing story with potential to be one of the best fanfics on here, so definitely read this, and keep it up author.

3yr
LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

Amazing, it's the best start I've ever seen in Marvel Fanfics. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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arno00
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Goven_Mazarini
Goven_MazariniLv1

YOOOOO Lets go maaaan its good ==========================================================================================================

3yr
David_Vasconcelos
David_VasconcelosLv1

I've been looking for a well-crafted Spider-Man story on this site for a long time and I finally found it. Continue writing chapters with that quality.

3yr
_Medeiros
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