Review Detail of AnotherAtlas in Transmigrated as Talion in Middle Earth - hiatus waiting for rewrite
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Writing's fine. Updates are a bit slow. Story was very close to the og at first, which was bad, but went it's own way afterwards. Worst aspect is the characters. I have no idea what the mc wants. It's like he's an empty shell. Not only that, there's extremely forced romance here, when that is not even a tag on this novel. World background is fine.
Transmigrated as Talion in Middle Earth - hiatus waiting for rewrite
I_am_Baal
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Well, thanks for the honest review I appreciate it, for the characters most of them are au and were introduced recently, the chapters that is coming is mostly about war bcs you know, they are right beside Sauron's capital so this is a struggle for freedom for this kingdom, the characters will be developped latter, for the uptades this will change I will uptade more, I got more free time for this. And for Talion, I put some infos of him to foreshadow something, this will be explained later why he is so empty, for the beginning this is just in my plans, and for his goals, I think I posted a chapter recently with one of his goal. Thanks for the review I appreciate it and I thrive to improve, I planned a lot for this story and it will have a lot of chapters, hope you will continue to read it.
I_am_Baal:Well, thanks for the honest review I appreciate it, for the characters most of them are au and were introduced recently, the chapters that is coming is mostly about war bcs you know, they are right beside Sauron's capital so this is a struggle for freedom for this kingdom, the characters will be developped latter, for the uptades this will change I will uptade more, I got more free time for this. And for Talion, I put some infos of him to foreshadow something, this will be explained later why he is so empty, for the beginning this is just in my plans, and for his goals, I think I posted a chapter recently with one of his goal. Thanks for the review I appreciate it and I thrive to improve, I planned a lot for this story and it will have a lot of chapters, hope you will continue to read it.
I_am_Baal:Well, thanks for the honest review I appreciate it, for the characters most of them are au and were introduced recently, the chapters that is coming is mostly about war bcs you know, they are right beside Sauron's capital so this is a struggle for freedom for this kingdom, the characters will be developped latter, for the uptades this will change I will uptade more, I got more free time for this. And for Talion, I put some infos of him to foreshadow something, this will be explained later why he is so empty, for the beginning this is just in my plans, and for his goals, I think I posted a chapter recently with one of his goal. Thanks for the review I appreciate it and I thrive to improve, I planned a lot for this story and it will have a lot of chapters, hope you will continue to read it.
AnotherAtlas:You added the romance tag. Nice of you to not ignore my review.