Story is good it keeps me hanging in althoug it's still in the beginning so might change later but keep the work up author. I think the good points of the story are the character and how his daily live is show in the beginning. It's good for the world building and character design. Only have one dislike myself and that is with the luffy part of the character but thats just me not having watched one piece so not totally getting al the things he does. It didn't sit well with me in the beginning and thought that i would drop this webnovel after the first chapter. That because i didn't see it fit in gravity falls, but it does slowly grow on me and i can see it as him being one of the mysteries in gravity falls. So keep the work up author.
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I understand you expected it to start already in Gravity Falls? I thought about it but I'm not good at showing the past too much and without showing his growth and difficulties I think my character would be judged like a lot OP
Sorry that i wasn't that clear what i meant that i didn't see luffy fit in the gravity falls story ,but that as the story goes on i see it fit better in the story.
And i think you show his growth in a good way. With a sort training montage and enemies he can fight so we know how strong he is. and can take comparrison with past and future fights how he's gotten stronger.
Thx... really. Thank you so much
