Good grammar. Good character design. For the time being I don't think that you could call Adelaide an anti-hero (for now she looks more like the victim, maybe I'm wrong though). There's a good pacing for the story and it's a page turner. Great job author![img=recommend]
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LIKELucienNg:Yes, she’s more of a victim atm, since I need to build her a power base (cuz she’s lazy and would never go on those training camps). Thank you so much for the review, though. 😊