Review Detail of Life_sa_Beach in Marvel; My wife is Hela; Goddess of Death, Just Saiyan

32 chapters in and I gotta say it's fine but not everyone would enjoy it. The kids ruined it. 100% ,them having children lowered the quality. And character development could have been better, the first 5 chapters of the fic was good after that it was just too rushed. And now after 30 chapters I just feel bored there isn't enough information to enjoy. The novel is like a slice of life so in my humble opinion a time skip was unnecessary and the fic went down hill from there on. I expected something like Silverfire but it didn't quite live up to the expectation.