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VanHellsing6969
VanHellsing6969Lv42yr
2022-06-18 02:03

Alright to be fair to this story the concept of a protag as a demon is quite cool and the first couple of chapters I liked but if there is 1 glaring flaw in this story is the reason for the protag eating people since he is a demon after all my problem stems from the fact that he does not need to eat innocent people why can't he traget criminals instead this way we could have have had a morally grey charchter instead of an edgy social justice warrior the m.c. act like And do not get me started on how quick the m.c. adapts to being a demon with no explanation on why he is so okey with it or any grief over his actions Overall this story could have been great instead of mediocre mess

Demon Slayer: Not Your Ordinary Demon

TheDevilsRejects
4.5
61 Chs

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Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

Wym edgy justice?

2yr
2
VanHellsing6969
VanHellsing6969Lv4

Every single time he gets the chance he keeps spouting that demon gotta eat humans blah blah nothing wrong with eating pepole blah blah It just that he keeps acting as if the demon slayers are wrong for judging and killing demons when obviously they are a threat to humanity wether they are forced to be cannibals or not and when he kills them he acts all self reightous

Spabsta:Wym edgy justice?
2yr
6
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

Ah gotta love those kinda people.. atleast its better then him saving every person he meets tho

VanHellsing6969:Every single time he gets the chance he keeps spouting that demon gotta eat humans blah blah nothing wrong with eating pepole blah blah It just that he keeps acting as if the demon slayers are wrong for judging and killing demons when obviously they are a threat to humanity wether they are forced to be cannibals or not and when he kills them he acts all self reightous
2yr
2
VanHellsing6969
VanHellsing6969Lv4

That's the point I just want a grey character not some edgy cartoon villian that only sees in black and white As I said in the review this is only the tip of the iceberg when it comes to the flaws with this story. His 180 when he becomes a demon is the biggest 1 so far

Spabsta:Ah gotta love those kinda people.. atleast its better then him saving every person he meets tho
2yr
7
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Sato21
Sato21Lv3

The characters' backgrounds are well written and ready for a great story. Also, the distribution of characters in demons and demons has provided the ground for great scenes. The lack of this style in the stories on the site is very obvious. The author's design is really great and commendable.

3yr

AstroKid
AstroKidLv12

Thanks for writing this story, it is the first demon slayer fanfic where the MC is a demon and the truth is that I was waiting for it since most of kny ff are all very the same and boring. Get on with this story pls.

3yr
Zby3ak
Zby3akLv2

I have not yet seen the two universes on the table. How can you screw up by connecting the Tokyo ghoul and the demon slayer? The hero changes his behavior 180 degrees stupidly because of one phrase about a pig. This is as stupid as possible and the author apparently could not think of anything more interesting and this pig will be mentioned even later.

3yr
Hellopeople1222
Hellopeople1222Lv13

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3yr
Mazin0_0
Mazin0_0Lv14

Hate how the author went about writing the character.

9mth
Sage_of_thruth
Sage_of_thruthLv2

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S1ckle_Cell
S1ckle_CellLv1

I'm curious how frequently, and consistently you'll update it but I love the direction of the story so far. Definitely has potential, keep up the good work.

3yr
YorumeSensei00
YorumeSensei00Lv4

Since it's the Demon Slayer World, the development and background are already complete. Currently on Chapter 5, the 12 Moon Demons was created after Michikatsu older brother of Yoriichi the man who almsit killed Muzan, so we can say that the current timeline, ranges from 150 years ago up to where the series started. Only problem here is that, the interactions of demons are far from what's supposed to be their nature. Here Muzan seems like an ordinary boss who cares for his subordinate and demons teaching other demons when it's supposed to be proving that they are higher in terms of hierarchial order. And it is stated by Tamayo that demons don't tend to form groups, except for Rui Lower Demon 5 as he have Muzan's Permission Another is the conversation, demons refer to the progenitor of demons as only "Muzan" instead of "Muzan-Sama" or "Lord Muzan". There are also the curse that prevents demons from saying his name so they should only call Muzan as "That Man".

3yr
Ziqiu_Meng
Ziqiu_MengLv1

Reveal spoiler

9mth
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