A really interesting plot it's a shame for the Writing quality, there are tons of typos and errors, also the punctuation is a mess. The story has lot of potential and a unique plot but you really need to improve the writing quality. Like this it's not entertraining. I would love to read it with an improved English. Work hard Mr. author, you have all the right credentials to write something incredible.

So far, so good, In the first chapters some may be repulsed by a very bizarre way of writting that they wouldn't be used to reading at all but I would recommend to stick around as the author makes fast progress as they write each chapters, of course, there are grammatical mistake but every story has them, the plot progresses at a good space, nor too fast nor too slow, in short, I would recommend you stick around and give this novel a read!

The story plot is really creative, i could really enjoy the way the story was going, but it's a bit confusing sometimes due to some manor grammatical errors. The author is doing well, you have my encouragement. Work hard, and you'll only get better and better.

Very creative! I'm not a big romance type person but the writing stile is very nice. I also love how it starts right away into action and the aspect that the character repeats different timeliness over and over again!

I'll say this, the story is interesting as far as the whole narrative beats and everything but the grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation hold this story back heavily. If the author can clean that up. I think the novel will be even more enjoyable.

Very good story! Gripping intro and very nice flow of conversation. Rameez is a likeable character that I can kinda relate to. The interactions between characters is my favourite part of the novel.

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The way the author write is kinda unique, using himself as a narrator and describing the situation work. But it's confusing on it's own, the way the author use punctuation is a mess. And too much "tell" that make it bland. But the story was good, the concept of revenge are neatly arranged with nerdy past of mc. Overall, it's decent to read.

This man got skills in writing Brilliant efforts!! The plot of story the characters The emotions The feelings Everything felt soo accurate.! The story is pretty suspenseful which is quite fun to read Love on your work from my side Waiting for the continuation